I was walking in the wood's, Waiting to see a small girl with a bright red coat when... I smelt a big load of juicy pork flying in the air. I hadn't normally targeted animals as much as human's, So I decided to have a small little feast before the dazzling bright coat sparkled my eyes. I was walking along, Sniffing the air when... Suddenly i saw a teeny straw house with a welcome carpet ( who was of course made out of straw.) I didn't know what the little pig was going to be scared of so i decided to sound scary and mean so the pig had no choice but to give up. I cleared my throat and said in a loud voice... Little Pig! Little Pig Let Me In! I after a moment of silence the little pig said in a small little voice, Not By The Hairs of my chinney chin chin! "Then i'll huff and i'll puff and i'll blow your house down." I said. I hadn't blew wind for a long time so I tried my best. Luckily, My breath power was strong enough to blow a straw house. Soon the small straw house tumbled on the ground. I was waiting until the small little pig decided to give up when... He jumped out of his straw window and quickly sprinted to another house which was probably his brothers house. It was made out of sticks and logs. The sticks were used for the roof as were made for the walls. They weren't the best logs if you asked me. So once again I said "Little Pig's Little pig's let me in! And of course they said "Not By the hair's of our chimney chin chin's! Then i said "Then i'll huff, And i'll puff, And i'll blow your house down! And of course i blew and blew until the log house was nothing but a teeny stick house. Suddenly, The two naughty pig's energetically ran to their eldest piggling brother. I was so hungry and it would be a triple pig delight! I was already licking my lips. The eldest pig's house was made of bricks and a chimney and wierdly a ladder at the end of the house. I tried to act polite like the post man but when i saw the three little pig's look out of the window their impretions looked like they were looking at a nasty old witch. I knocked on the door and obviasly said "Little Pig's Little Pig's I just want to join your dinner. But the little pigs weren't stupid enough to fall for that trick. They just shook their small head's. Suddenly i had an idea. Not any idea, An idea! I cautiously climbed up the rusty ladder and jumped into the chimney, But when i was slowly coming down i slimy slug caught my attention. I suddenly slipped and fell into a big steaming pot. "OUCH! OH OOOO!" I was burnt. I quickly sprinted in to the living room and then to the kitchen where i poured myself with i nice cold bucket of water. Then i awkwardly walked out the door. Then i sprinted back home. Then i said to myself, "Maybe next time i should try and get little red riding hood. To Be Continued... ( Next story's name... The girl teams with the pig's)
Kia ora Milo,
ReplyDeleteI am so glad you decided to write a story from the perspective of the wolf! I think you have done a great job showing his reasoning behind his actions and it is cool that you have linked this wolf to the one in the little red riding hood. Next time I would re-read what you have written to make sure you haven't missed any punctuation, like capitol letters.
Keep up the active blogging!
NJ