100 Word STORY!!!!

Hi Guys, today I made a 100 word story. It isn't that interesting but I would have done a better story. Something that challenged my was making this because I had to break up sentences and it was so difficult. Have you ever tried to do something like this before? Anyways, thank you for checking out my blog, Blog You Later! Milo(:

Once upon a time there was a Young brother and sister who were twins. One day they were going to the dairy. “Let’s get lollies,” said the brother. “No way! I want chocolate. It’s WAAAAY better than a sugary lollie. “ Chocolate has sugar, too smart guy. “How Rude! I’m A girl not A ‘guy’. “Well It’s not like I asked for your opinion. “Hey kids” “Oh Hey Raj” “Why don’t you just get one pack of lollies and one bar of chocolate. “ Fine”  “Here you go” “Thanks Raj” “No Problem.” “ Sorry for what I said.” “Yeah me too” “High Five!”