Friday, 27 August 2021

COOL AS VOLCANO WRITING PROMPT! (Not for Blog Battle)

 Kia Ora Everyone, today I checked out my class blog and saw this project writing task. There will be a part 2 for this story as well. Something that challenged me about making this was because it was very long and it took me around half an hour to make. Have you done a task like this? Anyways, thank you for checking out my blog, blog you later! Here's the story: Once upon a time there was a young small boy called Thomas who was always bullied at school. He lived by one of the largest volcanoes in the world. He had no friends and he was just lost. Several times he tried to tell his mum and dad but they would just say the same old thing that they said every other day. “There is nothing to worry about, the only thing you need to do  is ignore them” but it wasn’t that simple. Every day something different happened then the last. Monday for Thomas was Monday Munch which basically means all the bullies stole Thomas’s food lunch money and got soda, pizza and pies. Tuesday was called Tuesday trash bin which meant The bullies took Thomas’s lunch money and threw him in the trash bin which was full of disgusting things. Just before Thomas got out the bullies usually threw their leftover food and packaging at him. The week was basically torture for thomas. Wednesday was worse and so on and so on. The further day in the week, the worse the consequences were. Even though it wasn’t a consequence, the bullies claimed it as punishing him because he was a nerd. It was ridiculous how NO teacher believed Thomas because the bullies pretend to be amazing students but in reality they were mean bullies. One day, on the weekend Thomas was finally having a break from the school bullies. He was quite bored so he decided to go for a small walk across the block when suddenly, he heard a yell from behind his back. He slowly and cautiously turned around when he saw all the bullies chasing him on their bikes! He was too far away from home to get away. “We’re gonna beat you up” Said the leader of the bullies, who was called Tyson. It wasn’t long before the bullies had caught him. It was a saturday which meant big big big trouble. Thomas knew something worse than ever was going to happen. “Where are you taking me?!” Said Thomas in a loud voice. “Don’t worry, we won’t do anything. Just throw you in the volcano!” Thomas at start thought it was a trick or a prank until he realized it wasn’t. Time flied by and it had been already hours and the bullies forced Tomas to ride the bike because they were exhausted. The bullies had made a massive bike which could fit the whole entire gang in there. “We’re gonna throw you into lava!” Said one bully. Thomas attempted to flee several times but there was no use because every time the bullies caught up to him straight away.When they got to the very top it was basically night. There were tons of signs saying CAUTION! VERY DANGEROUS! But the bullies didn’t seem to be scared. “Ha, look how high you're gonna fall. “Wait before you throw him let me throw this massive rock to make the lava more angry” “Ye that’s a good plan” Thomas then quickly jumped out of one of the bullies arms and took their bike. He then rode down the volcano with such speed because it was downhill. Meanwhile Thomas’s mum and dad were so worried. They tried to go to the police station but due to the pandemic they could not get any policemen to help them. Thomas’s mother and father were crying until they heard a bike coming fast as heck! It was going so fast. It was Thomas! Thomas cautiously jumped off the bike and ran inside, telling the crazy story. “We’re just glad you’re safe,'' Thomas’s Dad said. His dad and mum had finally understanded him and they apologized. “Oh no!” Said Thomas. “What is it?” Said his mum. The bullies are still up the volcano. “We need to help them!” “It’s fine” everyone knows the short cut down the volcano. Remember? The firefighters told the neighbourhood in case they got stuck up there” “Oh okay” Said Thomas with a sigh of relief. He thought that the bullies might have learnt their lesson from that and he wouldn’t get bullied anymore. Meanwhile, the bullies started to take the short cut when they decided to throw one rock before they went. SPLASH! The noise was so loud and steam went everywhere. It looked so cool so they kept on doing it. After throwing rocks for around 2 minutes the volcano started to shake and a massive LAVA MONSTER came out and started to chase the bullies. “AHHHHH! Runnnn!” To be continued...




2 comments:

  1. Kia Ora Milo, gosh I love your story! I was on the edge of my seat as I read it! At first I felt really sad that Thomas was being bullied and no one (even the teachers) were helping him or being kind, but then it got to the exciting bit where Thomas got away and the ending looked a bit happier, so I could relax a bit! And what a great kid Thomas is - wanting to help his bullies even when he'd been treated so badly.

    I think you are a great writer! I particularly like some of the 'turns of phrase' you used: (1) The week was basically torture for Thomas (2) The further day in the week, the worse the consequences were (3) Thomas attempted to flee several times but there was no use because every time the bullies caught up to him straight away (4) He then rode down the volcano with such speed because it was downhill (5)Thomas cautiously jumped off the bike and ran inside, telling the crazy story.

    I can't wait to read Part 2! Great work!

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    1. Thank you for your feedback! I'm working on part 2!

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